कुछ प्रयास आपके समक्ष प्रस्तुत कर रहा हू.
आशा है, इस धागे को पूरा करेगे.............
बरसातॅ होती है बाढ पर ,
सूखी जमीन रोती है रात भर.
रात काली तो काली सही,
सुबह बियाबा पर होती नही.
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4 टिप्पणियां:
let me know the meaning of "badh" in the first line and "biyanba " in the second line.. then I wud be comment on it... let me check out my skills to complete it
Hi Buddy !!!
Nice to see this wonderful morning in ur kavita ....Can u please explain the term "Biyanba"..I will try work on this ..to give it a shape of KAVYANJALI...
Shail
baddyyy haaaaa
biyanba shayad ek aisa forest hai jaha unche unche junglon ke karan roshni jameen tak nahi phunchti hai......
Badh hoti hai barsat par,
Sukhee jamin hansti hai hal par,
jise jal kan bhi uplabdh nahi tha rat bhar,
Ab vo katti hai baheti hai jal dhar par.
एक टिप्पणी भेजें