मंगलवार, जनवरी 23, 2007

कृपया पूरा करॅ...

कुछ प्रयास आपके समक्ष प्रस्‍तुत कर रहा हू.
आशा है, इस धागे को पूरा करेगे.............

बरसातॅ होती है बाढ पर ,
सूखी जमीन रोती है रात भर.

रात काली तो काली सही,
सुबह बियाबा पर होती नही.

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4 टिप्‍पणियां:

preeti ने कहा…

let me know the meaning of "badh" in the first line and "biyanba " in the second line.. then I wud be comment on it... let me check out my skills to complete it

shail ने कहा…

Hi Buddy !!!
Nice to see this wonderful morning in ur kavita ....Can u please explain the term "Biyanba"..I will try work on this ..to give it a shape of KAVYANJALI...
Shail

Ravikant ने कहा…

baddyyy haaaaa
biyanba shayad ek aisa forest hai jaha unche unche junglon ke karan roshni jameen tak nahi phunchti hai......

Ravikant ने कहा…

Badh hoti hai barsat par,
Sukhee jamin hansti hai hal par,
jise jal kan bhi uplabdh nahi tha rat bhar,
Ab vo katti hai baheti hai jal dhar par.

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If you find moody among moodiest, you'll find me standing in the front file & on the sea shore of time on the sliding sand of my mind from the ripples of life. And that ripples is toast with the perfect blend of doing things in different ways. It is not like that I am different from any other, but I have something that differentiate me from the rest of surroundings, additionally integrate me with the characters roaming in my visinity. With that I am fond of moving off the track enjoying the twist in life. I hate stupidity, fake superiority complex, dishonesty, falsehood of any kind and indiscipline. Transparency in my life help me in deviating my energy to convert it into strength rather than keeping life black to look opaque. Being religious help me in getting out of stress and get my biological RAM flash out. Speed is my in-out. You find me fast express speaking man. It is hard to understand me sometimes when I was on peak of my expresso flow of words.